This work was not made for me. I thought it was something different, and it turned out to not be that. I am not, however, calling this misleading or bad because it does not work for me.
Even if it not what I wished for, I understand that your courage and artistic method. It is clearly something that deserves praise, due to the people who have resonated with this work for the same reasons I am unable to understand it. I may not be able to comprehend this prose, and the way everyone treats Angel makes me feel very angry, but I understand that this is not an unintentional flaw, it is the point.
However, the one thing that I was able to understand was the moment when Angel starts laughing. That, I believe, is the only scene where I felt at peace. When Angel laughs and begs for more, that is when Angel is powerful. It was very cathartic.
I write this not to center my opinion on your work as important, but to express how your art works on someone who is unable to understand. I thought it might be interesting for you. It would be for me, at least. I apologize if this review comes off as self-centered.
This is exemplary work, even if I am unable to conceptualize it.
-Calcarina