My personal favorite for all the 20 songs submitted. The harmony is the best of all the songs so far. The arpeggio at the start is my favorite. I love the fast notes over what sounds like harmonic minor. Personally, I would have leaned more into that sound and style that for the entire song. It stands out quite a lot. Another constructive criticism, only after re-listening to the song several times do I hear that ostinado that was in the start. I would've preferred it to be more noticeable in the rest of the song's segments. Maybe replace it with a marimba or something high-pitched so you can hear it.
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Thank you so much! Exactly, it is a harmonic minor scale. I added it again in the last and penultimate measure, but unfortunately, it doesn’t stand out as much due to mixing reasons. As for the ostinato, I completely agree. Instead of a marimba, I considered adding a kalimba, which has a sweeter and more delicate sound, but I eventually discarded that idea. Thank you very much for your comments! 👌🎵