finally got around to running this last night! good stuff. i love the art and dark vibes. i did add a secret door in the first room and the players ended up discovering it and going through the dungeon backwards. im also happy they ended up lighting all of the fire things so that was super cool! i definitely plan on running it again with another group though because i didn't get a lot of time to prepared and we got cut off at the end so didn't get to the last two rooms. super cool tho. one minor suggestion would be to expand on where the players actually start. do they start in the town or at the dungeon? I let them start at the dungeon and just fast tracked the background info.
Hey! Thank you for the feedback! Yeah, the secret door makes a lot of sense and I would include it myself to make it less linear. just have to wait for the map artist to change it and then will upload it! Regarding the start: depends on how much time you have and if you have players who enjoy a bit of roleplay. The entitled young maiden a lot of players enjoy to hate :). appreciate you taking the time!