Howdy Zen, if ya see this comment, I made edits to my Doc Critiquing prior notes and Critiques I had because boy fucking howdy it's nearly been a year, and I do not agree with how I conducted myself or even rambled without giving proper reference to what I was doing. I only recently remembered I was doing that because I looked through and saw your game in my folders. I marked things in colors where I thought I more or less disagreed with myself and looking back I feel a bit annoyed I was being kinda a twat in the writing as well. I kinda went on a writing Hiatus and then everything just kinda got forgotted