Feedback for House of Changes by kirrifant
1. A New Beginning
-I am not really hearing the Dies Irae theme here.
-The melody is slightly shrill and not very engaging or cohesive.
-The choice of instrumentation is effective, but it feels too monotonous. Maybe try introducing drums halfway through to liven things up a bit.
2. What’s Going on
-Good job at introducing a sense of mystery. The song fits very well with the title.
-I am getting Nine Inch Nails vibes.
-The instrumentation works well together. Everything is jiving. Nice drum programming!
-Good atmospheric track.
3. This is Home
-I am getting Nine Inch Nails vibes again.
-Good kind of melancholy feeling. I can see how this would represent acceptance of the house.
-Good synth work and drum programming. I dig the hand claps.
-Cool and effective use of subtle vocals.
-Still not hearing the Dies Irae theme.
Nice work! This seems like an interesting video game. Your weakest track, in my opinion, is the first one. I am definitely reminded of Trent Reznor/Nine Inch Nails in your second two tracks with your use of bass, synths, and drum machine. I honestly did not pick up on the Dies Irae at all, so I don't know if you were just trying to be subtle about it.