Concepts & Originality 5/5
The premise is interesting and the story was quite engaging. It kept me hooked to see what would happen. Well done!
Flow & Clarity 4/5
The story is well written, with evocative descriptions and good pacing. There are some slight grammatical mistakes and some dialogue that was a bit dense and made me stumble a bit. The former is a simple fix, the latter may just be a "me problem", rather than a story one.
Adherence to Theme 4/5
The story handles the theme in a pretty direct and interesting way. My only (minor) critique is that it's perhaps too direct and outright tells the reader what the "Creative Resources" are.
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