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Was really interesting the only that bothers me that in Nox route we were entertaining him a little too much that it felt strange and unrealistic in a behavior kind of sense. It always is a bot irky to me if characters are written without any kind of sense of realism.

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I didnt want to make it too realistic. But I will most likely change up a lot when chapter 2 comes out. But that will take some time. Releasing the first chapters of the other characters first

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I see i mostly wanted to give you a perspective if that was the idea then that's the idea. I just wanted to share just in case if the MCs character is supposed to be more realistic. Obviously there is not one way people act but the Mc definitely didn't act like most people but again if that was the plan then i don't find it irky anymore. Either way it's just a perspective neither right or wrong and definitely not trying to tell you how you should write. I'm curious to see what chapter 2 will be like ^^

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A bit of the plan ;) though there may be two seperate smut scenes at some point. 


I'm actually a total noob when it comes to writing it haha!