Interesting! A kind of analog horror twist on golf is a super cool idea and the narrative components with the dialog and the cool effects and hidden messages is a great vibe. I freed the blue guy, but I wasn't sure exactly how to get to the next stage of the story, do I just need to hit a low enough score?
Really cool idea, I love golf games, I love the verticality of the level, and I love creepy story stuff. its like half minigolf and half marble run half horror game. I think there is something super special in that concept.
Great job!