You asked for corrections of your English, here they are:
- "Horny" is what you describe a living being that has sexual urges, you wouldn't call a piece of media that. "Hot" would be a better fit.
- "... there is no voicing in the lewd scenes..."
- "...as this, it's called 'After the Inferno' on..."
- "And hey~ if someone sees this comment, please recommend
tome other great games like this~"
Your English is pretty good already, keep it up! Similar games like this I'd recommend are:
- Eternum by Caribdis
- Stormside by Atemsiel
- Realm Invader by InvaderGary
- My Bully is my Lover by NiiChan