Hi,
I really enjoy your game. I plan on becoming a Patreon supporter for you at the end of February. (I support a number of game-makers there and I like having my dues all due around the same time.)
Anyway, I'm playing the first episode and I've noticed there are a fair number of misspelling and other grammatical errors in the text. When I run into one, it "takes me out of the game" which kind of spoils the fun for me. (I'll attach 2 images of these with this post, but there are also others.)
(I also noticed you don't use periods at the end of sentences, but I guess that is a creative choice.)
Do you have someone to *proofread* for you -- or can you get someone to do so? If not, I'd be willing to do so with your game's text. That's up to you. But I do hope you do get someone to proofread, because as I said, when I encounter one in-game, it throws me off. That might just be me -- I read a LOT of books.
I'm looking forward to Episode 3!
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