I quite like the improvements made to this update, though it did take some getting used to with the change in art style. Some good progress and I do hope it can eventually be fully fleshed out and a little more refined. The new scenes are alright but the story progression is okay. I noticed 1 typo in the new update. "t" is alone with one of the dialogues you have with Jade. I don't have much else in terms of constructive feedback but man are we close to crossing the line with Marie... only a matter of time. Best of luck to development and looking forward to whatever comes next.