Pretty damn good so far, love the feel of the worldbuilding and the dialogue, plus the art's among the best I've seen on Itch. There's several grammatical errors I noticed sprinkled throughout, but other than that I can't really find much to fault thus far. You've got a rock solid foundation here, I'll be keeping a close eye on everything to come from here on out.
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Hey, thanks for the feedback!
I'll make sure to run a thorough review of the script to iron out those typos before our next update.
I'm wondering if the grammatical errors you've noticed come from Sasha, because those are intentional. If that's the case, I'll also have to work on driving that point home in the future.