Ooooooh! I enjoyed this! I finished two playthroughs and I'm going to finish up a few more later today when I get some more time. Great work overall and I think a twine game like this works perfect for the theme as well.
Thank you! I like to make story-centric games so with a three-hour span, Twine just felt natural.
Thanks for playing! Version 2.0 is out! Features cutscene art for every page, FMV, sound effects, music, and new flashback sequences.
If you have a chance to try it out I'd love to hear your thoughts.