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Hi Vorpal, thank you so much for your hard work, this game is undoubtedly a shining star. From the world-building to the storyline, everything is well-organized. The scene design and animation quality are exceptional. The Interactions between characters and the writing of their actions & thoughts are quite lively. 

In addition, it is a very smart idea to have a graphic symbol next to the character when they speak, and a small icon to express their mood. I also appreciate the transition between small chapters with the flash-black effect and game title, it really enhances the game’s pacing. All these little details truly reflect the care and effort you've put into the game (and the secret hidden in the naming part of course lol). Well done. 

The only thing that puzzles me is that Linea's scenes seem a bit less complete compared to the others. If this is intentional, I completely understand, but if there's a plan to improve this part in future updates, that would be wonderful.

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I'm very happy your enjoyed the game and liked the icon system! ^^
Sadly, the scene with Linea doesn't currently have an animation due to time constrains. But I plan adding them, along with more dynamism in a future update <3

I see, thanks for explaining! Really excited for what’s coming next, keep up :)