This game gave me a good chuckle, love a good troll game, and some of those trolls really slapped XD. You'd kick ass at mario maker, the variety and comedy of the trolls you packed in this little game is impressive. Also having a checkpoint was really nice, and separates this game from rage troll games like cat mario. Think you could keep going hard on the trolls, got a little confused in the last segment when going slowly because I was waiting for the ceiling to come down to do something cursed, which I can see was a little hassle to implement :p
I also think art can stay secondary, be funny if the art improved as the game went on tho :p
Love it, keep it up!