I think this is a really good example of how to make a good game with maximum focus on one specific thing. If you're going to make a very simple game with little gameplay and no visuals, the writing should really stand out, and I think this game does! I had a really fun time playing, even though it was super simple. And I'm generally not a fan of CYOA type games, but I liked it a lot. I didn't play through all the endings but I was surprised how many I enjoyed reading through. Visuals could be nice but I don't think lacking them takes away from this game at all. Text skip might be nice but the game isn't *that* long without it. A lot of people are saying the music is too loud but I think it's moreso that the music, especially the lead, is dry. I think a lowpass filter or some effects such as reverb or a touch of delay would go a long way towards making it sound less harsh, especially with it being so repetitive!