Great job on your first game! As with nearly any game, we can all benefit from some polishing right? I don't think there was any game-breaking issues, but some proper animations could be nice (top down sprites are usually viewed from an angle like the old Zelda games or completely top down) and skipping a line of dialogue in the beginning could end with spelling the whole sentence out immediately first before going to the next line. I hope you can see that these are small things. Your game is really solid and is completely playable, I guess it's just that any game could be polished over and over again to make something even more appealing. Still, amazing work, especially for your first gamejam!