That was excellent! Really good implementation of the Dialogic plugin. I loved the pixel art, it was really creepy and had this dreary, heavy vibe that captured the feel of the game well.
I got caught by the police a couple of times, oops! Narratively, this was really interesting and well-planned. Every time I died, I was like "oh, yeah, of course I forgot to do that."
Great entry and a solid point-and-click game.