Gosh Polly is on a short fuse huh? Great visual novel, I really liked the text effects. I liked how to fix the relationship, that was cute. Fab entry!
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Now I know I definitely shouldn't be trusted with nuclear power, hah. I like the polish on this, and appreciated that you could turn the alarm off! I think a radio-esque music system would be neat here, as if the operator is listening to music while they work.
I kind of wanted to see the power plant explode 😈😈
A stunning submission. I love your palette choice, the beautiful animations, the smoothness of the platforming elements and the music. This is honestly a polished and gorgeous entry! I loved the theming too, more games should have flowers 🌸🌸
If I had any feedback, I'd say that the dialogue could have a little "next" indicator when it's finished and ready to move onto the next screen. I think you could animate something really gorgeous for it!
Loved the meta-ness of this, there's always something fun about jam games that play on the event itself. I personally can't handle jumpscares so I had to stop playing, but it's got great ambiance and polish! I can see how horror fans would like this a lot. Fantastic entry, well done team!
For other feedback, I'd maybe add a text advance option on the intro, as the text stays for a long time before moving on.
That was moving and emotional, and I think could really strike a chord with a lot of people! I absolutely felt the mounting dread of not being able to keep up. Excellent effort!
I think the only feedback I could give would be to tweak the volume levels a little, I'd want the sound effects less harsh and the music more standout (I could hardly hear it) but that's really all. Loved this!
This is a really fun idea! I really struggled to hear / understand the narrator; I think captions are almost an essential feature of any narrative sim. I feel like I missed out on a lot of what makes the game great because I was trying to parse what the (excellent) voice over was saying. I liked the underwater floor the best 👍 great entry!
A seriously excellent VN - I love all the work put into making it seem ominous, like the post processing on the memory segment and the way the title screen appears. I liked how obvious it was which things had possible interactions, I've played a few other games in the jam that forget that part, so you spend a lot of time clicking around in confusion!
Great twist at the end too. Really enjoyed this!