I finished this one, and I enjoyed the story a lot. It has a very gripping style and the characters did felt well made and characterized. There are some pacing issues, though. I felt like there was a big chunk missing between the “prisoner interview” and the actual story, and it took me a while to get a hold of what was going on, but as mentioned, the story was really great.
Some more interactivity would greatly help this project, as it feels too “straightforward” as is. Overall, I enjoyed it a lot and would love to see a more fleshed out version if you intend to do so. Great work!