Your intro tutorial dialogue is funny! Very nice way to engage the player to learn the game. I liked that when I got too close to the cars, it made a beeping sound that really made me feel like it was a close call. I think that the snail game took a little bit too long, as I wasn't sure if the game was going to continue or not if I kept playing it (I also never figured out what the hearts did). Love your art style, it adds a lot of character, and goes well with the music. I really enjoyed that your game had a whole narrative to it, with choices and voice overs. I'm so impressed that your game is this in-depth! I usually don't play game jams for this long, but your game had me engaged for over 20 minutes!
The ending I got (I'm assuming there's different endings?), was that I called the detectives bluff and decided to stay for the money. The following car-level got very difficult! So I crashed lol.
Overall, amazing game, super impressed, very polished!