I just started reading but how can MC says that the villain is smilling or any facial feature if chronos wears a full face mask?
BTW, is that world trade on the back of the bridge? If it is, perhaps you should change it.
Amazing story, but it feels like you should re-write it longer... even adding more heroes and villains... you have everything to make it big
Thanks; also the game page says there’s a part 2 coming in August, this is just the first half.
great!!! but I won't complain if you decided to rewrite this whole part in a calmer speed... it all went too fast... but it is still amazing
