Congratulations on improving the story so much!!! I am looking foward for the continuation!
ictio
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Great to read that... But just to explain, I am autist and I still think that MC is too stiff... perhaps you can soft them up since the beggining or during the story as character development or a little of both . This way will get easier to people to relate with them to the point they will feel like them.... just a suggestion though
This commentary has spoilers... but since I am still on the beggining not that much..
It is impressive how things develop so sunddenly and so fast... I thought that would have some friends time... but out of nowhere: boom! polyamorous... at least on this beggining... I need to keep playing to see how things evolve...
Estou gostando bastante, entendo que Tyler não possa ser sub... a menos que vc invente uma forma bem escrota de quebrar ele kkkk
só uma dúvida... pq fazer parecer como se fosse um ensino médio... podia ser um 'centro de reeducação' de alguma distopia bizarra... daí o MC pode escolher em virar obediente ao regime ou ir contra também... liga não... acho que estou viajando aqui. parabéns!