Hey, thanks for the lenghty review! :3
About the floraverse vibe - we’re fans of it and played all your games, so there’s some inspiration coming from there :D
Also there’s a Cherry Kisses reference in the Yu’s room (masturbation scene with the “Hee..”) - not sure if you noticed.
Regarding the minigame, I wanted to have some interactive replayable part in the game which would serve as the income source, but the execution is lacking because it’s not actually a rhythm game, rather some kind of a weak click-in-sync-and-ignore-the-music game. I’m planning on reworking and redesigning this section entirely because it doesn’t require any new art.
I’m very happy that you like the world (just a small village, but “world” sounds cooler) we created~! We had a few more characters planned and more story would unfold, with possible expansion to the north (a bridge through the river maybe) - but as it usually goes with a jam game, we couldn’t fit everything in in such a short time (flu season didn’t help as the artist was sick for over a week). The dialogue is heavily influenced by me reading tons and tons of doujins which usually have this kind of cheesy stuff. Maybe I should read more serious erotic literature?
Also it’s my first time writing dialogues so I need a lot of practice in this field… but I think I learned a lot writing for this game. I hope I can persuade my artist to work on this or some other NSFW games in future, because it was a lot of fun :)
Here’s a reference sheet to give you a hint of what other characters we had planned.