Shame it ended on the first day, it was getting kinda interesting!
the world and the character(s) are developed enough to leave you questioning what else you might not know about the society, especially with that fish section.
a few notes:
I couldn't see the character that well.
Please do add more contrast to the characters sketches when overlapping them with the bg, for example: paint the sketch in with grey, even a sloppy fill is better than no fill at all!
The intro
(This is just a small thing which didn't ruin the experience at all) i didn't honestly enjoy the intro. I can't pin point exactly what it is but it just feels boring, and a bit cahotic too. maybe adding a small sequence of pictures to show what happens and then immediately dropping the player on the beach instead of a black void with text would have made me more invested.
Overall it's a good prototype and i'll be definitely looking forward for updates UvU and next time i'll be sure to keep my hands off of Ritch's stuff ;v;