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Hey there, I'm really glad that you enjoyed the game.

Hmm, I'd check with the nice lad that created the gallery if I can add something to modify the Gallery name.

As for the script, well I don't have any knowledge in coding, this game is the first time I'm going at it, and the script was really looking terrible before !

Still I'll try to refine it a bit more, thanks for your feedback !

Oh sorry, I don't mean the code when I say script. I meant the dialogue. Some of it could be rewritten a little better. The message comes across fine as it is, but sometimes my flow as a reader is broken by some grammatical errors.

Oh yeah, well english isn't my native language so I often send a part of the script to a proof reader !

Thing is he took a few weeks off, so I try to figure out the grammatical errors myself but some just get through the net unfortunatly, still, thanks for pointing it out I'll try to be more careful !

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No problem, glad to be of help! If it weren't for spoilers I'd be willing to provide some proofreading.