I like the darkness and the creepy vibe.
But the camera and the way the player looks are off. It makes it hard to move around.
The pieces of paper you have to read, disappear way to fast. I thought I was a fast reader but there isn't enough time to read the whole thing. At least 2 more seconds unless that's what you were going for. The weird looking around, movement and the jump key doesn't work for me.
2 for how creepy it is.