This game seemed to start with a pretty interesting concept. The girl trying to get her life together despite her mother and the other girl trying to recover from a lifetime of bullying was interesting. The story was pretty well written, but none of it really seemed to tie in at all with the concept of a VR rpg game they were testing, and I kind of feel like that part was tacked on just so it wouldn't be a visual novel. Perhaps a full game could explore the concept more and make it really come together.