Hey there! Not sure if you saw, but we did high level feedback of your Jam entry on our YouTube channel:
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Should I break down parts of flashback of Miya's past when she's in the VR world? Feels more like Inception with the main character's wife haunting him whenever she lurks at a bad time which is similar to Miya's bullies haunting her... Personally, I really want to complete this game from start to finish. :\
Heya! While judging is going on, we don't want to get too, too involved in feedback. But suffice to say you can summarize that Mia owes Arika her life in dialogue, then maybe do a quick flash-sequence with a "voice over" (text over?) showing that it wqas during a vulnerable time, etc. Then, as the game progresses, have it come out in bits and pieces. I could be a comment here to another character, or a small scene there. Just add it up so that the player slowly comes to understand how deep it goes.