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No problem! I didn't find anything weird or any glitches, however I found a few simple typos! Instead of describing where in the story I found the typos, I just wrote down what line the typo was made in script.rpy on Editra, I hope that's okay!

1.  "You're rewarded by the clear, new color of the parts underneath, and the the sticky, slightly staticy sound of the film being removed." -  line  6138 (double "the")

2. "Hands so hot, they might as well be meling your casings." - line 7793 (misspelling of "melting")

3.  "You pause just a moment to straighten them, seting them snugly right." - line 7891 (misspelling of "setting")

4. "You let out an undiginifed whine, needy, doing your best to try to cover it with a cough." - line 8326 (misspelling of "dignified")

5. "This utter desperation cleaning out reserves of emotion and frustation you didn't know you were holding back." - line 8391 (misspelling of "frustration")

6. "Though, if she were, you tell her maybe you'd have emptied her lube cartidge by this point." - line 8848 (misspelling of "cartridge")

7. "Stopping isn't eithout sacrifice for her. She was close to finishing, too." - line 9129 (misspelling of "without")

8. "A glancing touch alongthe side of your touchpad..." - line 9366 (missing a space between "along" and "the")

9. "And the sudden stumulation of multiple fingers causes her hand to quiver, just a moment, before she renews her movement." - line 9556 (misspelling of "stimulation")

10. "When you start to get too dry, she leans dow, to moistening you with her tongue." - line 9788 (misspelling of "down")

11. "You'd expected the new genitals to give you a condifence boost." -  line 11267 (misspelling of "confidence")

12. "She gestures wildy, soap flying off her-half washed hands." - line 6022 (misspelling of "wildly")

13. "20/10 eysight- twice as sharp as most normal eyes- is the baseline for this year's models." - line 190 (misspelling of "eyesight")

14. "If anything, lights in her eyes should make them funtion worse, whenever they go off." - line 721 (misspelling of "function")

15. "She keeps rumaging through the cabinet nonchalently." - line 2719 (misspelling of "rummaging" and "nonchalantly")

16. "Let's get you two acquianted before you become a permanent item." - line 2774 (misspelling of "acquainted")

17. "Her fingers detatch and a rogue index finger lovingly strokes the back of your hand." - line 2806 (misspelling of "detach")

18. "Dr. Kato has requested her assistant demonstate her programming." - line 3019 (misspelling of "demonstrate")

19. "Knowing that is is so very important to hear Dr. Kato's words." - line 3446 (double "is")

20. "I have other ways to anhiliate your inhibitions." - line 4276 (misspelling of "annihilate")

21. "Your arousal and obedience are linked inexcorably now." - line 4633  (misspelling of "inexorably")

22. "Obedience, suseptibility, arousal. This strawberry scent pumps you full of all of them." - line 4657 (misspelling of "susceptibility")

23. "And she's pushing you past any bioloigical limits." - line 4947 (misspelling of "biological")

24. "You want so desperatetly to please Dr. Kato." - line 5466 (misspelling of "desperately")

25. "Oh. Don't let me interupt you, then." - line 5492 (misspelling of "interrupt")

26. "If the entire room were an elevator then it would have started plumetting." - line 5697 (misspelling of "plummeting")

27. "Your eyelids rapidly flutter, you can scarecely keep them open." - line 5700 (misspelling of "scarcely")

28. "Thank you for chosing Full Service Shop. I really do hope I get to see you again for another mod in the future." - line 5736 (misspelling of "choosing")

29. "For now, we hope that you will pease enjoy one of the other routes." - line 5809 (misspelling of "please")

I apologise if any of the spelling errors aren't actually errors - I'm not American so we spell our words slightly different haha :) Anyway I didn't pick up any other mistakes! And the safeword worked perfectly! Good luck!!! 

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Whoa, this is incredible! That is a lot of work to go through, and reporting the typos this way makes them so easy to find and fix. Thank you so VERY much! We'll get right on these.