I really liked the visual style of this game! It sort of reminded me of Myst? Also the sound work was wonderful, and put me on edge (in a good way).
I would work on having a consistent tense for the narrator, as it shifted quite a bit. Here is an example:
"After a short walk down the road you come across the old bridge, it's schedule to be demolished next month but it should be fine to cross since your not in a car."
I would make all of this past tense / clean it up a little bit like so:
After a short walk down the road, you came across the old bridge, which is scheduled to be demolished next month. But it should be fine to cross by foot.
I think there were a few places where you flipped between ending with a period and ending without. I would try and be consistent.
Enjoyed my playthrough and thank you for sharing!