Great polish, art, audio, and narrative. It had a twin peaks vibe from start to finish. I really liked the car driving scene and the sheriff was a great character.
The audio for Duane's dialogue was a bit ear-piercing and annoying, all the others' were fine. Like others said, using Lahey's key did feel silly because he was already in the locked room. The laundry room was the last place I checked when the phone was ringing which quirked up my experience a bit. Also the checkpoint being before the phone call seems out of touch after the after death experience, plus a tad frustrating to click through before trying again.