I love this. It's weird, it's surreal it's great. The visuals are bizarre and I love it. I'm not a fan of a game explaining itself but in your case it seemed to fit most of the time, I'd love though if the world would be affected and influenced by the text like the looping narrative looping the world. Also more indication that I'm moving when I'm flying. I wasn't eventually sure if I'm moving at all. Great stuff!