This is a well-executed piece of interactive fiction. I did speed read it, but I interpreted it as dealing with nightmares that come with anxiety, and processing the uncanny between real and imagined. I think the setup was excellent and really allowed the reader to invest in the character and their background, whilst also being able to use choices to direct the narrative in a few ways. This allowed it to feel like a very fluid, open ended story, which is exactly what you want with this format! Well done!
Thanks for submitting I Live Next to a Train Track to the SCREAM MACHINE jam!
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