Hello, thank you very much for your feedback! Yes, I am from Russia. Unfortunately, our team did not have a translator to make a good translation into English. But I will try to solve this problem in future updates.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Our team was lucky to have a good artist who painted almost all the characters in the game. As backgrounds, we took photographs and processed them. It turned out atmospheric.
I spent a lot of effort writing the script and did not have time to make a decent ending. Initially, I wanted to write a linear story. But I plan to improve the plot and add more gameplay. The ending will definitely be rewritten. I also want to expand the story of Mary. She became one of my favorite characters, although initially she was planned as a secondary character. In addition, the release did not include another character whom we drew. It will be added along with updates.
Now, for the visual novel, our audio designer has created 2 tracks, I want to expand the musical component and add music and sounds throughout the reading.
Creating a short story was a difficult test for me. I will take a break and try to get back to development as soon as possible. I would be glad if you will follow the project.
Final song deserves to go through the game to the end. XD