Definitely a great start. I like the fire that the MC has, makes for a nice change from a lot of MC's where they are polite no matter what :DI found her...belt? A little distracting with how bright it is compared to the rest of her outfit (had to go to Lemmasoft to look at the full image to figure out what it even was). And one small thing - you may already know - the children call the MC 'Miss Ari' even if you have a custom name.
Alaric is definitely my favourite so far <3