A cool little story this is.
Interesting setting and character.
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Summary:
Adherence to Theme
- You are on the road with some things in your pack. The Story could've incorporated packing things a little more but it gets by just fine.
Game Design
- it is a solid Visual Novel,made for mobile screens. That hurts us desktop cats a bit but it was playable very well on my screen, since the Ui was well designed.
Originality
- Highly original idea. Excellent work!
Style
- Some graphics seem to be unfinished, I guess you hit the same brick wall with time that I did with my art.
- What's there is pretty stunning and visually interesting, some sounds effects where a bit loud but not obnoxious (though I guess it was for dramatic effect), this is not counting the excellent Ambiance sounds used.
- I liked that there are multiple pathways that branch off shortly but come back together quite well.
Overall:
I like this. It was interesting and enjoyable for what it did. Some more refined visuals and a continuation of the Story would be something I look forward to!