I really like the new version! Great job!
I found two smaller editing errors:
Page 23: Missing full stop punctuation mark (.) on entry 1 and 5.
Page 27: 'If a there is ever a...'. It should say 'If there is ever a...'
Thank you Claes, I'm really glad you like it! You are right, any more typos let me know!!
Page 8: Impossible is not written in bold as the other difficulty tiers.
I'm taking note, thank you very much for the contribution!!!
Did you see my comments on the character sheet?