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Hi!  :)  No bugs/glitches to report thus far (and I'm love-love-loving this VN!), but I have noticed a number of editing/proofing issues.  Since this VN is still in development, I didn't know if perhaps you're planning on doing revisions in the future (and don't need/want any help with that aspect of it)?  Or would you like to be made aware of those I happen to come across?  Things like spelling mistakes, missing words, extra/unnecessary words, mixed tenses, awkward phrasing, etc.

If you would like to be made aware of them, I was thinking I could do the edits on screenshots, upload them to albums on imgur.com, and then send you the links privately in an email (rather than here, publicly) due to potential spoilers for others, and content that falls outside the scope of the demo.

I hope you don't mind me asking/offering here on the community forum.  I was unable to find an email address for you.

Cheers, Ney  :)

...and now, back to the story!  Things are getting very interesting, and kinda eerie!  *shivers*  The sound effects in "the place beyond the path through the woods" (don't want to give away any spoilers) made me break out in goosebumps.  LOL!  :P

Hi! That sounds like a great idea, if you feel like helping us out:) You can contact us by email to: aedianglair@gmail.com

We're glad you enjoy it so far!<3

I'm very happy to help!  Thanks for the email.  :)

The story is so good!  I've had to force myself to step away from it throughout the day, to make sure I get my chores done.  Heh. :P

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I know that it's a year late ;), but just wanted to let you know that most of your text edits were great and I added them to the game. Thanks a bunch!