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You are the second really good quality game I noticed with not much ratings and has just fonts for title screen.  I think there's nothing wrong with your title screen as it is in the game, but as a first image to draw people to click on your game  you might need something more visual than just fonts, incorporate some graphic elements from the actual game might help, or  maybe even just use one of the actual screenshot from the game instead of the title screen could do the trick.  

Keep in mind that's just my guess, and  we are still in early stage of voting, so people might come around still without you changing anything.