This is a good game! I like the style you started with using doodles to tell the story. I think the doodle style is better than the style you went with in the game itself, so maybe you could work with that.
The gameplay is also fun, as I have to constantly shoot the robots while finding the best position to hit the electricity. The level design is also great, starting with robots that can't kill you to learn mechanics, then slowly build up to deadly robots.
I was having a bit of trouble with the player movement and collision though, sometime's I'd bump into a wall I still have some distance from. It felt really hindering and I think it should be fixed
I like that you went with a slo-mo animation to emphasize the kills, but maybe make it faster and not as zoomed-in, so we can appreciate the elaborate connections we end up making. Animating electricity going through the wire would be great as well.
Can't wait to see this polished and expanded!