I had a lot of fun playing through your game! The narrator has a distinct, interesting voice, and a lot of the game was very funny (and vaguely depressing, when you think deeply about the social circumstances you were commenting on). I do feel that gets a bit absurd/characters are overly caricatured at times, but I also understand that this is satire and probably a feature of the story.
In terms of game mechanics, I'm not a big fan of the mouse-over text. I feel that it's way too easy for me to accidentally open something and it breaks immersion/the text that I was reading. Also, there are segments where you had to wait for text to appear, which is unintuitive at first. This is just personal opinion, as always.
A few small nitpicky things:
- You have a lot of extra line breaks (or lacking line breaks) in the game. This is a problem I encountered a lot, and it's annoying to resolve, so I understand not wanting to deal with it.
- A couple of typos, nothing serious.
Thank you for your submission~ it was a pleasure to play this game!