I really liked the world building and characters, as well as the special effects on the text in certain sections. I didn't like that sometimes you clicked on things and it was just an inline exposition and other times it took you to new passages as there's no indication of which is which so a few times I clicked on something thinking it was inline and was sent elsewhere before I had read the entire passage. The chapter length was perfect and I think this is going to be a really interesting series. I will definitely play the next chapters.