I think that you should change the file name, it would be better if it was the name of the game or its version.
The music was a bit annoying, it is very clear that it's a loop.
It has a weird style. It reminds me of Baldi's Basics. I don't really like that style but if you do, go for it.
Btw, you shouldn't add that walking animation to the camera. It gave me motion sickness (I suggest you search about it and take it into account in future projects).