I liked this game a lot--it was more like an interactive story, but had gamey elements anyway. The arcade game was such a refreshing touch! Little things like that go a long way to making a game feel well thought-out. I flirted with the policeman twice and got put in jail :(
I would recommend putting some kind of sign-posting towards the beginning so players have some immediate goal at the beginning. As is, the three people in the opening scene don't say anything helpful or give a hint about where to go next, so it feels listless and a little frustrating. Or, maybe I just missed it, haha.
Anyway, great story-telling job. I learned from this game how simple but effective it is to have good dialogue paired with nice visuals.