Wow great game! I got really immersed, and went in for a second playtrough! The link break really gave me an eerie feeling. I really had hopped that there would be more to do in that direction!
The art awsome, if the ability buttons matched the rest of the art i think it would be much nicer! (have them scribles and be worn out like the rest)
I do get that the font you chose ads to the atmosphere but its so hard to read. And read is almost all you do in this game! So having this kind of font for the comic parts might be cool but for the game elements it would be more important to be able to read it easily.
You created a great atmosphere, good job!