Comparing this to your previous submission on the March Jam, I think a lot of improvements were made on this game and overall the story is more expansive than ever! Great Job!
Theme - 5/5
Aesthetic - 4/5
Comedy - 1/5
Gameplay - 3/5
Story - 3/5
Thanks for the comment, and yes, the next update (0.0.7) touch more the story part of the game!
