OK so after playing the game for a significant amount of time I have to give some honest feedback here.
1) At times the English is quite broken, with words used incorrectly, plurals where there should be singulars and missing words proliferating the narrative. This is hard to get past when the majority of the story is mainly narrative with little interactions for long stretches. If you posted a location for feedback I am sure there would be many willing to offer you suggestions as to where the grammar and spelling could be improved.
2) The MC is incongruous at times, and the choices you make seem to have no effect on his personality. He goes from a spineless, weak willed lackey to an assertive and confident man and back far to quickly, despite whether or not you choose options that feel more assertive and dominating. It's hard to reconcile the character portrayed to us when we choose aggressive options, only to have him go back to being so pathetically submissive.
3) Back to a point I made earlier, some of the stretches between interactive decisions are far too long. There is something to be said for a great narrative, but players need to have a feeling that they are contributing to that narrative, and often we don't get that. Not to mention that even when we do, it seems to have very little if any impact on the story line.
4) The sudden disappearance of Kate and Jane, to have them so criminally overlooked, is rather strange. You have a moment with Kate and then poof she is gone for a very very very long time. Jane you never get the option to take advantage of her teasing when you first meet her, despite the fact that it would make a great opportunity for player interaction, which is frustrating as it takes away any and all agency you have as a player. Movies can get away with such things, games really can't.