The dialogue and concept is kind of cringe in general. The visual novel style game works in terms of controls and the assets are well picked and placed for the most part. It's just not my cup of tea.
My assumption was you were trying to sure up your visual novel prototype with whatever but then I read in a comment on the game page that you used a game engine so I'm not sure what you were trying to accomplish. I guess it was just for the lulz.