That was a very sweet story! There was a ton of art that helped make the story less monotonous. I could totally imagine it being a comic or storybook for children, especially since Amber's experience is something a lot of students face.
It felt a little on the long side though, maybe if the dialogue was condensed or it was split into chapters that'd help? I'm glad I played through it though! Hopefully others won't pass over it just because it's not a browser game.